Script Doctor

 

Ext.     Location 1 –     Estate

G:     Man, you guys like takeaway food don’t you?

G’s friend:     Foods good for you.

G:     Yes, especially McDonald’s!

G:     There’s this guy I know. He eats his McDonald’s out of the bin. He says its best.

G’s friend:     If you think you’re trying to put me off or something, you’ve got another thing coming.

G:     Yeah because you like it out of the bin as well blud.

 

 

Ext.    Location 3 –     Park

Kwame:    I wish I could be a footballer.

G:     Yeah playing football as a job and earning all that money is ape bruv.

Kwame:    Yeah, but imagine missing an open goal and everyone ridicules you and stuff.

G:    Yeah, you know what my left foot is like.

Kwame:    Your right foot needs work as well.

They both laugh.

 

Ext.    Location 3 –    Park    (Back to Present Day)

Kwame throws the ball at G which hits him bouncing off him and brings him back to his senses.

The gang cycles off.

G:    Were not playing dodgeball!

Kwame:    Oh, I thought we were.

Kwame smiles 

Kwame:    Sorry G. You were a million miles away. I just brought you back to reality.

G:    Shut up bro.

Kwame:    Here I got something.

G:    Can I have one?

Kwame hands him something.

G:                        I wonder if this will make me high?

G swallows the product given to him.

Kwame:             These are just some sweets my Mum gave me.

Kwame laughs.

G looks embarrassed.

G:                     I don’t want any sweets. Let’s get some proper drugs.

Kwame:          Drugs will make you crazy believe me! If you want to become a statistic be my guest!

G:                     Look bruv I need some drugs.

Kwame:          No you don’t and you ain’t getting any. I’m telling you as your bredgren

G:                    Well screw you blud!

 

Ext.    Location -1     Estate

The sound of police sirens can be heard

G either in voiceover? or speaking out loud?

G:              What have I done! I thought it was that gang. I think I need to seek mental help!